白鸟与蝙蝠真相揭示

The title and author introduction at the beginning feels like unnecessary self-promotion, both for the book and the publishing company. It reminds me of the feeling of having to introduce myself despite being in the industry for so long. The writing style feels like a mix of ancient-style novels and concise modern writing, where short sentences are used to convey the story and dialogue, while longer paragraphs are reserved for descriptions of scenery and emotions. The scene of two characters facing each other and avoiding eye contact, especially when one of them is a police officer, raises doubts about their true intentions. The detailed description of the protagonists expressions could have been pared down as it is unnecessary. The confusion and suspicion are mostly in the protagonists mind, and theres no need to over-emphasize it. Surprisingly, this chapter is quite lengthy considering its just the beginning and doesnt cover much plot-wise.